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Falling in Fiji (The Falling in Paradise Series) (Volume 1)
Casey Hagen, Lisa Ricard Claro
Progress: 141/286 pages
Origins - S. E. Meyer A DNF book - I really thought this book was going to be a great choice for me. But, it turns out that I couldn't continue past the second chapter.

I felt that the prologue was enough to keep me reading, but then chapter one dragged on and on. I found that some information was repeated, way too often, and in a manner that made it seem like the author was introducing it for the first (not the third) time.

All in all, the premise of this book seemed great. There's a need for someone to go back and proofread (many unnecessary capitalization, misplaced commas, quotations, etc all in just one chapter), as well as give editing advice. If this were reworked a bit, I might throw it back on my TBR.